It can be difficult for small local shops to compete with large supermarkets and with on-line shops. How does this affect local communities? What could be done to improve this situation?
Summary Nowadays there is more choice for the consumer than ever before. Large supermarket chains sell products from around the world at
rock bottom
prices. We are Add a hyphen
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this
comes at the detriment of small local Linking Words
shops
, and our local communities. I would suggest that we need to take measures to address Use synonyms
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problem. Large chain Linking Words
store
are able to purchase and trade a very large volume of goods and, Fix the agreement mistake
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they can sell goods with a very small profit margin. Add a comma
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Likewise
, online retailers have comparatively low overheads as they do not have to maintain a shop. Linking Words
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then
passed on to the customer in the form of low prices. In comparison, smaller local Linking Words
shops
have to sell products at a relatively high price in order to make a profit. Unable to compete, they often face closure. The problem with Use synonyms
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is that the community loses Linking Words
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that differentiate one town from another. With the loss of these Use synonyms
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generate more employment than larger, chain stores. What we need to do is to encourage people to shop locally. Use synonyms
This
could be in the form of publicity campaigns, highlighting the benefits of supporting local Linking Words
businesses
. The government could Use synonyms
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play a role by offering tax breaks and incentives to local Linking Words
businesses
so that they are better able to compete with larger companies. Use synonyms
To conclude
, we can see a number of, mostly financial, reasons why smaller Linking Words
shops
are unable to compete and that the loss of these Use synonyms
businesses
would have a negative impact on the community. Individuals and government both need to play a role in supporting local Use synonyms
businesses
so that we can preserve the diversity of our towns and cities.Use synonyms
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