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Nowadays, people are moving to other countries to seek jobs. Some people think it affects the children of such home negativity while some others think it is beneficial to them. Discuss both sides and state your opinion

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Many people these days are migrating to a foreign
country
 for jobs. While some people think that it induces negativity in children towards their home
country
, others argue. In others opinion, it is beneficial for children travelling abroad. According to me, children should travel abroad so that they can learn to be independent and
also
 learn different cultural values. On the one hand, there are people how believe that children who migrate to other countries begin to think negative about their homeland.
This
 is because, according to them once a child moves into a different nation they forget about the cultural values and tradition which was inculcated in them as they were a child.
Moreover
, it makes
a
Suggestion
an
 individual rely on their family and relatives that they will never be able to survive elsewhere.
For example
, many students from India who travel to the US for
further
 studies goes on to apply for a green card and never return back to their home.
Hence
this
 is considered to negatively impact people.
On the other hand
, my view is that travelling abroad either to study or to work will only instill confidence in an individual. It is very important for people to learn about other countries culture and tradition and adopt the goods it has to offer.
This
 will eventually make a
person
 more independent and boost the morale of a
person
 and make him successful.
For instance
, there are many entrepreneurs
such
 as Sundar Pichai CEO of Google who has not only studied abroad but
also
 migrated permanently and is very successful. If he never moved out of his home
country
, he would have never become the
person
 he is today. In conclusion, even though there are some negative effects of migrating to a new
country
, I believe there are many positives which makes a
person
 successful and independent.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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