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The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australias share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australias share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The first graph illustrates information about the
number
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 of Japanese who visited other countries between 1985 and 1995. The
second
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 line graph presents more detail about the percentage of tourists to Australia from 1985 to 1994.
Overall
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, there was an upward trend in the
amount
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number
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 of foreign tourists from
Japan
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.
However
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,
although
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 the
number
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 of visitors to Australia looks proportional to the
number
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 of people visiting other countries, there are downward trends
in
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apply
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between years and ending years. Between 1985 and 1990,
Japan
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 saw a considerable increase in the
amount
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number
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 of people going out
for
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on
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 vacation. The numbers which were around 5
million
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 in 1985, went up to about 11
million
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 in 1990.
In contrast
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, despite,
Australian
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the Australian
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 share going from 2% to just under 5% by 1988, it remarkably declined in 1988 by 1% and increased to 5% by the end of 1989. Notably, Global tourists from
Japan
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 declined by half
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million
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a million
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 from the previous year in 1991.
On the other hand
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, Australian tourism from
Japan
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 interestingly increased by around 1% in the same period. After that, the
number
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 of external visitors increased approximately by 5
million
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 by the end of 1995, but
Australian
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the Australian
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 percentage decreased by 1% between 1993 and 1994.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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