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Some people think that the range of technology available to people is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. Others think it has an opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Today is an era of globalization and modernization and
technology
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 play a significant role. Some people believe that because of
technology
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 we have seen a wide
gap
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 between the rich and poor people. While, an army of people observes that,
technology
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, plays a vital role to bring the rich and poor community together.
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 essay will discuss both sides of the argument, and provide evidence why
technology
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 enhances the
gap
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 between the wealthy and a derived class.
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 with, a wide range of products is available in the market, that's based on
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. People from the higher class easily bought expensive products as compared to the poor class community because they have money.
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, Wealthy pupil
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 completes their work in a time by the use of computers and other electronic devices. But, lack of knowledge and less availability, poor people can’t afford expensive items.
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, According to Hindustan Times, the
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 between the rich and the poor people increases because of the advancement in
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.
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,
Technology
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 is responsible to widen the
gap
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 between the
two
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. On the opposite side, some people claim that
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 is helpful for both localities. They
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 believe that with the help of mobile phones, people can easily communicate with each other. They
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 think rich and poor people can
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 entertain themselves by sitting on a single roof like cinema houses.
This
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 is possible only because of the
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. So, according to them,
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 helps to bring the
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 communities together. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down, saying that
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technology
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 brings
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 classes together. But, it increases the
gap
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 between the
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, as rich people have money and they can easily buy the product
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 based on
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,
however
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; poor people cannot.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Digital divide
  • Socio-economic classes
  • Economic opportunities
  • Democratizes access
  • Technological gadgets
  • Advanced educational tools
  • Remote work
  • Online courses
  • Digital literacy
  • Digital inclusion
  • Underprivileged communities
  • Technological advancements
  • Cutting-edge technologies
  • Economic standing
  • Quality of life
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