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Should we invent a new language for people from different countries to use for the international communication? Do you think there are more benefits or more problems with it? Explain.

#language #people #countries #communication
In
this
 world, full of hundreds of different languages, creating a new international
language
 may create more trouble than completing any objectives. Creating a completely new dialect may cause an initial huge communication gap, and being relatively new dialect, people may often find themselves lost in translation.
Firstly
, after being introduced as a standard mode of communications, every person has to be accustomed to it as fast as they can, which will cause a communication gap among
first
.  As in these days, almost every country has people of various different cultures and national backgrounds with different languages as mother tongue living inside them, so introducing a new international
language
 will create a linguistic barrier among citizens.
Secondly
,  all other languages have been around here for thousands of years. So as at the initial stage when the
language
 spread into different countries, various words from different dialects got added to it, which made it's vocabulary rich and evolved and easy to use for people from different cultural and social background. While a new
language
 won't have that richness among her, so most of the time users will find themselves lost among translations. Now, there is a common notion that having English as international
language
 disrespect all other languages. But one should
also
 know that every one commutes in the English, because it is the most popular
language
.
Also
 English has been evolving for thousands of years and
as a result
, modern English words and vocabulary is so much different than earlier, almost all
language
 has some of its words which have become part of the English dictionary which makes it so easy to use in communications. So, we can see introducing a new international
language
 will pose more problems than  creating solutions.
This
 new
language
 because of not having the richness unlike others may cause not only misunderstanding, but
also
 a huge communication breakdown among the public.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international communication
  • mutual understanding
  • language barriers
  • foster inclusivity
  • equal opportunities
  • global forums
  • simplify learning
  • resource-intensive
  • cultural erosion
  • linguistic diversity
  • emotional attachment
  • cultural attachment
  • achieving proficiency
  • access to education
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