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Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help other. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#say #opportunity
There is a part of society who is in
position
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a position
 to serve others. Many people feel that the riches have the best opportunity to help others. In my opinion, I completely agree that rich people can help others by doing
charity
 work and generating employment by doing local
business
.
Firstly
, rich people can help the people in need by doing some
charity
 work. It will provide them the basic necessities of life to live.
Furthermore
, with the help of
charity
 they can extend their support to their family which will give a sense of accomplishment to them.
For example
, some kids who do not have access to education can get it with the help of
charity
.
Therefore
,
charity
Suggestion
the charity
 will not only help people to improve their life but
also
 motivate them to work hard.
In addition
, rich people have the ability to do the almost any kind of
business
 and doing
business
 at local level will generate employment for the one’s who are in need of it.
In other words
, being employed will improve their overall lifestyle as well as encourage them to help
further
.
Take
Suggestion
Track
 construction of
factory
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factories
a factory
,
for instance
, it will generate numerous number of jobs during the construction phase but
also
 after completion.
Thus
,
business
 will help needy people to have a
job but
Accept comma addition
job, but
 will
also
 make rich people richer so they can help
further
. In conclusion, rich people
has
Suggestion
have
 the best chance of being able to help others which will give a sense of
fulfillment
a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
 to them and ultimately, make
lives
Suggestion
the lives
 of other people better.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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