The system used for rubbish or garbage collection in your local area is nowt working properly. It is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours Suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring your attention because the suburb located in Rivervale has been facing some issues with the garbage collection system for about 3 weeks.
To begin
with, the current system used for rubbish
is not useful now because the collectors do not arrive in that area due to
closing roads. There is only one main road to access the location and the reparation will not be done until two months.
Since, we faced this
challenging situation, as neighbours we planned to bring the rubbish
bins to the closest disposal general area in Belmont. However
, due to
families' commitments have been a difficult situation. Also
, the high cost to carry the rubbish
daily to other location
, so unfortunately, we will not be able to do it anymore.
I would like to suggest that you should hire more workers to clean the Fix the agreement mistake
locations
rubbish
bin using small trolleys. After that, they will be able to deliver them to the general rubbish
truck, so I consider that this
is the best solution for everyone.
I hope you will fix this
problem as soon as possible. Please do not hesitate to contact me about this
matter further
.
Yours faithfully,
Claudia PatinoSubmitted by klaudia2301 on
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task achievement
Provide specific examples of how the situation is affecting you and your neighbours in terms of health, cleanliness, or overall quality of life. This would enhance the completeness of your response.
coherence cohesion
To improve coherence, clarify the transition between the problem and the alternative solution proposed. Introduce the suggestion with a sentence that relates directly to the problem described.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is suitable for a formal complaint, which is commendable.
coherence cohesion
The letter is well-structured with clear paragraphs dedicated to different aspects of the issue.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriately formal.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite