Q: News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. Waht is your opinion about this?

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In recent times, most news on the media are being presented through
picturial
pertaining to or consisting of pictures
pictorial
forms. There are those who are in support of
this
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medium.
This
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essay discusses why I totally agree that
news
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the news
should be broadcasted using images.
Firstly
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, pictorial representation of news helps create memories that cannot be easily eroded.
This
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is because the brain capture images faster and recall familiar things previously seen.
For Example
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, during my trip to
dubai
port city in the United Arab Emirates on the Persian Gulf
Dubai
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
was able to identify the famous building '
Buj
general term for any insect or similar creeping or crawling invertebrate
bug
khalifa
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Khalifa
' because I have watched it previously on Tv
.
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.
Further
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More,
pictures
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the pictures
makes gives a clearer view about things that can be easily
misconcepted
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.
For instance
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, one can write that an accident had
occured
come to pass
occurred
, but it will be very difficult to know the exact extent of the injury
sustain
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sustains
, which can be seen through pictures.
Secondly
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, broadcast through photographs can be understood by all.
This
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is due to the fact that it does not need any special skills or formal training as compared to reading. Both the learned and unlearned can deduce the meaning of the information being presented.
This
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will eliminate message truncation.
For Example
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, in a recent survey conducted on elderly people in Nigeria, it
was deduce
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was deduced
has deduced
that they prefer watching news on TV rather than listen to
radio
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the radio
because they do not understand English. To sum up, in my opinion, it is
effective for
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effective, for
the media to present news stories with pictures as it creates
memorie swhich
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memories which
cannot be forgotten and does not require any academic training to understand.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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