With an increasing overweight population some people think universities should make sport a compulsory module on all degree courses. To what extent do you agree?.

Obviously, there are many skilled workers prefer to move out of from their home country.
Firstly
,
this
is because their native place may not offer a better standard of living.
This
means there may not be a good salary package, social security benefits, even promotions are given based on the bias and personal preference.
This
can have serious impacts on the home country. One possible issue is that they often loss their most dynamic and talented academics, which severely affect educational institutions as they cannot train their future generation as they have less number of experts. Many areas badly hit with
this
: health care system, technology, and construction field. Apart from
this
, these nations tend to l
osewfinancially
as well, nowadays, most of the countries offer free education to its children, but these children
,
Accept space
,
later on migrating to developed countries.
This
can lead a financial crisis.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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