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Technological innovations have affected our lives. Do you agree or disagree?

#innovations #lives
In
this
 technical world, the profound influence of
technology
 on human
life
.
Therefore
, it is considered that
technology
 affected the
life
 of everyone. I am in consummate accord with
this
 notion. In my upcoming writing, I will delineate the impact of technical things in human
life
.
To begin
 with, ample number of advantages but one of the most significant one is that it reduces the workload from shoulder of individuals. In other word in these days, mostly mortals taking an assistance from technical goods to accomplish their work. Good example of
this
, washing machines, vacuum cleaner, dishwasher and so many other commodities are available in the market, which are used by people to complete their home chores. Owing to which mortals can save their precious time as well as energy. Probing ahead, the invention of social media had dramatically changed the social interaction among the people because in these days numerous social sites which assist people to communicate with near and dear who live far from them.
For instance
, Facebook is one of the most popular application all over the world and billions of people using
this
 application for communicating. What is new, the
technology
also
 changed transport systems. Nowadays, all buses, cars and other mode transportation are more convenient, luxurious and comfortable than bygone era.
Also
, most vehicles run on CNG and electricity. Which is not only good for people,
however
,
also
 for our environment. To recapitulate, after analysing the entire writing. I concluded that due to advancement in
technology
life
 of individuals more comfortable and luxurious than past.
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