Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Savage animals have less and less importance in our environment,
nevertheless
, it did not use to be like this
formerly. There is a debate about whether we should protect these animals or not due to
the waste of resources. Personally, I think that it is always good to protect them because it is a way to make them still part of the ecosystem and because as humans we have the responsibility of protecting other ways of life.
I firmly believe that these wild species have an irreplaceable role in our ecosystem. They are part of the food chain and they contribute to the well-being of nature. For example
, predators like lions or tigers, keep the population of other species in control by eating them. On the other hand
, herbivores contribute to the well-being of the earth by eating plants and many other types of herbs. In addition
, a Dutch scientist specialising in wild animals named Robin Van-Persie, states in his most recent study the disaster that the disappearance of these creatures would mean in our system. That disappearance caused by stopping protecting them could cause big problems such
as ecological imbalances.
It is , without doubt, the responsibility of humans to protect the ways of life that were on Earth before our arrival. Unfortunately, we have caused many problems to the environment with actions like the destruction of habitats or climate change. Having the obligation to protect these inhabitants of the planet does not mean that, for instance
, hunting is wrong or should not be practised. In fact, a study by the University of the Environment in Bucharest ensures that the practice of the sport is very good for regulating overpopulation and that in no case should we stop doing it. However
, this
hunting has to be regulated.
To conclude
, these species must undoubtedly be protected by humans to ensure the health of the planet and for a matter of morality and principlesSubmitted by santos_dij on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure to maintain a clear and logical progression of ideas in each paragraph. This will enhance the overall coherence of the essay.
task achievement
Clarify some ideas more thoroughly to ensure the reader fully understands your point. This can be achieved by providing additional explanations where necessary.
task achievement
The essay provides a clear stance and effectively discusses why we should protect wild animals.
task achievement
The essay includes specific examples, such as mentioning the role of predators and the study by Robin Van-Persie, to support its arguments.
coherence cohesion
Effective use of introduction and conclusion helps frame the argument neatly.
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