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Nowadays, the internet and television have given ordinary people a chance to become famous. Is this a positive or negative development?

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It is surprising how common
people
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 are becoming popular in no time, thanks to the internet and television. In my opinion,
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 the sheer benefits it brings to humanity as a whole,
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 trend is largely a positive one despite minor misuse by some. To start with, the entertainment industry is dominated by nepotism or by those who have money;
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 the less privileged
people
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 do not get a chance to prove their talent.
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this
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 reason, the internet is a blessing for those who wish to achieve fame and showcase their hidden talents independently.
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, apps like Star Maker and TikTok which are especially designed to record videos have gained a lot of popularity and have
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 made
people
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 famous overnight.
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, some maniacs can exploit the media and get
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fame. Their published
contents
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 and views can influence many uneducated and
mentally-ill
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people
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 to follow them.
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, some channels on social media
platform
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platforms
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 tend to inspire others to carry out acts of violence. They preach violence in the name of Hinduism, Christianity, Judaism, Islam, and Sikhism
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make
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 the society unstable and
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 economic development.
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, it can be said that the internet and television have provided numerous ways
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 talents to those individuals who do not have wealth or who are not from reputed families. Despite the fact that these channels could be misused by some miscreants,
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 trend should be considered
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a good one
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 the numerous benefits it brings.

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