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Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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It is a nasty fact that people believe that the animals would not have any place to live in the
next
 century and so, these days do not consider saving
wild
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
life
 as their utmost priority. I vary with the statement and would want to explain that saving
wild
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
life
 would be beneficial
for
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to
 our
survivial
a state of surviving; remaining alive
survival
. Animals are important to our own existence, they are the one who
maintain
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maintains
 the food chain and keep it intact.
For example
, frogs are
essential source
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an essential source
the essential source
essential sources
 of the chain if they are
extinct
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extinct, then
then
 there would be a distract increase in mosquitoes, which can cause harm to humans.
Thus
, Animals are very much needed in our
life
 and we need to ensure their protection as our prime responsibility.
Furthermore
, the World is their home
also, we are
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, we are also
 sharing our
spaces
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space
 with them, we have got no right to infringe their boundaries and leave them no space to survive.
On the contrary
, being a superior
species it
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species, it
 becomes our
accountablity
responsibility to someone or for some activity
accountability
 to make
this
 World a better livable place for all the breathing things.
Therefore
, it becomes are main
responsiblity
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
 to protect these animals. In conclusion, Earth is a shared place, it is not ours not theirs.
Eventhough
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Even though
 we may not consider
wild
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
life
 to be important and worth protecting, we still sure know that they are necessary for our lives,
hence
, I
completly
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
 disagree with the fact that protecting
wild
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
life
 is a waste of time.
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