"Developed countries have created many environmental problems. What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?".

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The advanced nations of the world have constituted much havoc to the ecological space.
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is hazardous and
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a threat to global warming
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global nuisance can be curbed if there is a timely intervention. The solution to global warming includes increased recycling of products, awareness on the importance of afforestation and its positive impact on the ecology of animals and by extension humans. Advanced countries are the main culprits of toxic waste by means of emission of greenhouse gases, which includes Carbon Monoxide known to be harmful to the environment. These harmful pollutants are poisonous to the environment, continuous exposure to it, can result in death.
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, global warming can be reduced by recycling waste, take
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xample household
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example, household
waste can be sorted into r
ecyclables which
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recyclable, which
recyclable which
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be used in factories rather than expending energy to produce virgin products. In the
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decade, recycling h
as proved
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has proven
effective in the fight against climate change as It saves energy, minimizes greenhouse emissions from landfills, and encourages the production of more energy efficient products.
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, another solution of great benefit to g
lobal warming crisis
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the global warming crisis
is Afforestation. It involves tree planting which is one of the cheapest ways of tackling the climate crisis as it takes carbon dioxide out of the atmosphere. Afforestation contributes positively to the environment by providing oxygen, improving air quality
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preserving soil and supporting wildlife. Recently, the amazon in Brazil was b
een
the state or fact of existing
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depleted by the government as the felling of trees tampered with natural habitats of animals.There was a worldwide outcry to protect the amazon as
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could lead to global warming. Many animals have lost their h
abitats
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habitat
to erosion or even become extinct due to loss of natural habitat, awareness that
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practices i
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in adversely
lead to drought and affect food production, will limit
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unhealthy cultivation. In conclusion, the solution to global warming includes increased recycling
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awareness on the importance of afforestation and its positive impact on the ecology of animals.
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