Some people think that the age limit for driving should be increased to make driving safer, do you agree or disagree?

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contemporary era

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the contemporary era

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technology is mushrooming day by day. Due to the vehicles it easier to go one

place

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to another

place

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.Now many people says that the limit

age

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should be increased for driving to make driving safe.I partially agree with

this

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statement.

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with,

Age

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limit is important for the driving

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Firstly if

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Firstly, if

the younger person below the

age

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of eighteen

drive

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the

vehiles

a conveyance that transports people or objects

vehicles

there is

high risk

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a high risk

of accident because some young

childrean

a young person of either sex

children

drive

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vehicles very fast.As the

result it

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result, it

occurs the high rate of accident.

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In my city the younger boy

age

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of fifteen died because he

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drive

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drives

car very fast and

strunk

having strength or power greater than average or expected

strong

strung

strain

into the truck

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Secondly

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create

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creates

the problem for the elder persons

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because they face lot of

problem

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problems

due to the

youngster

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who

drive

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very fast. On

other hand

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the other hand

Age

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limit is not important for the driving because sometime

youngster

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goes

one

place

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to another

place

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for their work

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if the girl

age

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of seventeen go to market for his important work the she go market on

scooty

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Scooty

city

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Moreover some

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Moreover, some

youngster

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are

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very

intelligent they

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intelligent, they

can easily learn the driving and they are very attractive while driving or sometime they

drive

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better

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then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

the elder persons.

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Furthermore some

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Furthermore, some

youngster

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has

huge responsibility

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the huge responsibility

of their family

also

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So they fulfil their family

duteis

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

duties

details

dates

also

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. In conclusion

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I think It depends on persons driving hos they

drive

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because every person has your own hand.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

242 words

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Some people think that the age limit for driving should be increased to make driving safer, do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

in the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. to what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causing problems not only for poor, undeveloped countries, but also for industrialized and developing nations. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggestion least one possible solution.

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, Believe that school is the place to learn this. Discussion both these views and give your own opinion.

Young people learn more about good behaviour from books or films/ movies than they learn from real-life experiences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?