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Giving lectures in auditoriums to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching with the technology available today, there is no justification for it, and everything should be online. To what extent do you agree or disagree? give your own opinion

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Taking lessons with a teacher in auditoriums surrounded by a lot of others
studants
a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution
students
 became
a
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an
 old method after the advance of technology and its possibilities. In my opinion, if something is old doesn't mean it does not work as well as new methods. The advent of
techonology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
 came up to create alternatives and improve techniques. As a student, you always try to find as many methods as you can to study and each one has your own specific way to learn. Learning from a teacher in a physical classroom has
the great
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the greatest
 possibility
of
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to
 interact between students and create social
ambient
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ambience
.
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, the fact of having the class to
take it
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take, it
 makes you create a
commitement
the trait of sincere and steadfast fixity of purpose
commitment
 with it and do not skip it.
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, learning online has the advantage of being
whererever
where in the world
wherever
 you
want but
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want, but
 even still studying.
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, if you are sick and need to take some class on that day, you can do it online without missing anything. In conclusion, the technology emerged to help with the people's life. Not everything has to be done online nor even without technology. It does not to be extremes, just need to be
adjust
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adjusted
 to the necessities.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Traditional teaching methods
  • Face-to-face interaction
  • E-learning platforms
  • Virtual classrooms
  • Technological advancement
  • Flexibility in learning
  • Self-paced study
  • Immediate feedback
  • Cost-effectiveness
  • Geographical barriers
  • Digital divide
  • Social environment
  • Networking opportunities
  • Hands-on experience
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