Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children, while others think it is the fault of the parent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Ever since fast
food
came
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has come
in the market sector,
obesity
among children rose drastically. According to some people, parents are responsible for
obesity
, others,
however
, believe that the
government
has a big impact on the rising
obesity
among children. In my view both are responsible. In
this
essay, the responsibility of parents, as well as the
government
regarding
obesity
among children will be discussed.
To begin
with, there
are
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is
a plethora of reasons why parents are responsible for rising
obesity
.
First
and foremost, a lot of parents are uneducated;
hence
, they are oblivious about nutrition,
that is
why they feed their children whatever feel or think is good for them,
as a result
, most children gain fat by eating an excessive amount of saturated fat. One other reason is that some parents are reluctant to see
or
of or belonging to us
our
guide what their children are eating.
For instance
, there
are
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is
a plethora of fast
food
shops who often tempt children to eat,
thus
most parents go along with children and eat, in order to make their children happy.
Hence
, some people and I believe parents are liable for rising
obesity
among children.
On the other hand
, some people and I think that the
government
is
also
accountable. Because they have authorities to ban fast foods or any
food
which has an enormous amount of fat content.
For example
, there are multiple harmful oils' brands which people import from different countries, these should be banned, as well as the
government
ought to facilitate healthier oils to serve in cooking.
Also
,
the
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The
local governments need to encourage people to consume
food
which has less contained fat.
This
is just a viewpoint,
however
, the
government
is doing nothing;
hence
, some people and I consider that the
government
is
also
responsible for increasing
percentage
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the percentage
of
obesity
in young children. To sum up,
although
it is not solely
parents responsibility
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the parents' responsibility
parents' responsibility
parent's responsibility
, to some extent, the
government
's reluctant behaviour
are
Suggestion
is
accountable too in increasing
obesity
among children.

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