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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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There is a view in some people that very crucial details of a person
such
 as
culture
 and
character
, can be easily identified by their selection of the clothes but I totally disagree with
this
 statement.
To begin
 with the
culture
, it is aligned with a person’s life from very long time and
can not
can not
cannot
 be identified in a few seconds from their clothes.
For example
, if any lady is having the white
color
a band that fits around the neck and is usually folded over
collar
colour
 dress,
then
 it does not mean that she is attending a marriage but it can be the death event. In the India, it is a
culture
 that people do wear the white clothes in the event of death.
However
, at the other side, in the America, people used to wear the white
color
a band that fits around the neck and is usually folded over
collar
 in the marriage function.
Thus
, it is hard to understand the
possiblity
a future prospect or potential
possibility
possibilities
 of one’s
culture
 from the clothes perspective. Another one is the
character
, it is psychological proved that the dress code is a key to gain people’s trust easily.
Therefore
, smart people often used
this
 as
tool
Suggestion
a tool
 for their own
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
.
For instance
, Nirav Modi, a cheater who made a huge money with the fraud and
down graded
rate lower; lower in value or esteem
downgraded
 India’s economy by showing the good personality as a
business man
a person engaged in commercial or industrial business (especially an owner or executive)
businessman
 and with his well suited clothes to Punjab National Bank.
At
Suggestion
On
 the other side, Narendra Modi, a Prime Minister of India, who
alway
at all times; all the time and on every occasion
always
 wear decent cloth, he made a great success in improving India’s economy as a politician.
Hence
, It is wrong to decide a person’s
character
 by looking at his clothes. In conclusion, while some people encounter that it is easy to note a person’s
culture
 and
character
from
Suggestion
of
 their clothes, I
recommanded
push for something
recommend
 not to do the same which might can cause trouble
to
Suggestion
for
 them.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • garments
  • traditional attire
  • sartorial choices
  • expressive style
  • cultural identity
  • psychological implications
  • non-verbal cues
  • globalization
  • perceptions
  • professional demeanor
  • societal norms
  • economic constraints
  • subcultures
  • fashion movements
  • individualism
  • stereotype
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