Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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People generally have a conception that celebrities have
a
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an
influence on their children through media. I agree that the well known person has an
impact
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on the
children but
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children, but
to a little extent.Let us discuss more about
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in detail.
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First point
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The first point
is we all are watching the famous personalities since from the inception of television. Children are enthusiastic to see their famous stars on television and try to impersonate them.
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doesn't have a negative
impact
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if the celebrity is a dignified person with moral character.
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instance Obama
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instance, Obama
, the Potus of the Unites States have so many followers
through out
all the way through
throughout
the world and children are one among them. If they follow the footsteps of
obama
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Obama
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there is no problem as Obama is a person with high moral and ethical character.So it's depends on who the kids are watching and how they perceive them.
On the Contrary
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, there are some famous persons who are controversial, abusive and make fierce speeches. There is a worry when
kids
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the kids
try to mimic them.
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example take
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example, take
the Joker Character of Batman Rises, who is a
physcopath
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and if children like and imitate him in real life
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it leads to a traumatic concern. As per the University of
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, it has been proven that television has an
impact
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on the building of child's Character. So it's the responsibility of the parents to keep an eye on about what their offsprings are seeing
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The conclusion is there is a limited
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of the famous celebrities on the children and the best way to tackle the issue is to explain the good and bad to the kids.
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The government
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should take precautionary measures to control the controversial shows.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Celebrity culture
  • Glamorization
  • Unrealistic expectations
  • Self-esteem
  • Scandals
  • Role models
  • Moral development
  • Mental health
  • Influence
  • Exposure
  • Social media platforms
  • Charity work
  • Inappropriate behavior
  • Perfection image
  • Negative impact
  • Inspire children
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