The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015.

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the failure

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of marriage in

Finland

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and

Sweden

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between 2011 and 2015.

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, the divorce

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of

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was

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higher than

Finland

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's divorce

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during the period except in 2015. The percentages of

Sweden

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had a downward trend

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, the percentages of

Finland

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had an upward trend. Though there was a decline in the

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of

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from 2011 to 2012, the

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went up from 2012 to 2014. But, it remained steady in the years 2014 and 2015. As the summit of

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highest / peak rate in

Finland

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was slightly over %40 in the years 2014 and 2015,

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trough point was around %35 in 2012.

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the

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Sweden

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increased from 2011 to 2012, there was a downward trend after 2012.

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the rate of

Sweden

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reached a peak in 2012

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around %50, the trough point was around %35 in 2015.