The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015.

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of marriage in

Finland

and

Sweden

between 2011 and 2015.

Overall

, the divorce

rates

of

Sweden

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higher than

Finland

's divorce

rates

during the period except in 2015. The percentages of

Sweden

had a downward trend

whereas

, the percentages of

Finland

had an upward trend. Though there was a decline in the

rates

of

Finland

from 2011 to 2012, the

rates

went up from 2012 to 2014. But, it remained steady in the years 2014 and 2015. As the summit of

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highest / peak rate in

Finland

was slightly over %40 in the years 2014 and 2015,

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trough point was around %35 in 2012.

Although

the

rates

of

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Sweden

increased from 2011 to 2012, there was a downward trend after 2012.

While

the rate of

Sweden

reached a peak in 2012

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around %50, the trough point was around %35 in 2015.