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success is solely achieved by hard work, luck does not play any role. Do you agree or disagree?

#success #work #luck #role
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Success
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 is achieving your desired goal, it gives you immense pleasure and satisfaction.
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 the main drive behind the
success
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 is hard
work
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, but
luck
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also
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 plays an important role.
This
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 essay will argue how significant is hard
work
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 or
luck
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 in getting the
success
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. While dreaming is important to start, but putting your hard
work
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 in that dream is essential. Just dreaming about your grand
success
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 is not going to
work
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 until someone puts the efforts. If a student is aiming to top the exam, he cannot just rely on
luck
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, he has to
work
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 hard to meet his target. Dream is not which comes in your sleep, dreams is what, which cannot let you sleep. In order to become a successful person you need to burn midnight oil. I believe that, people having ting of favour by
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, become successful. Because there are many people who are working very hard but only one out of them will reach the top. I believe
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 is his fortune. As many people prepare for civil services, all top ten rankers are bright students and it is difficult to differentiate among them, still only one top the exam. I believe
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 slight difference is created by
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, as topper student should have got more favourable questions that day. So it's my believe that
Luck
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 plays its role. Since hard
work
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 is the
first
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 step to the
success
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, so no one can achieve his goal without efforts, but after putting his efforts it is time for your
luck
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 to play. Even it does not mean that our
success
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 completely depends on
luck
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,
firstly
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 everyone has to burn himself to succeed in life.
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