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There have been many inventions in human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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Throughout mankind’s history, many inventions have been created and changed human
life
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 dramatically.
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, a lot of people think that the Internet is the most important invention. In my opinion, I agree with
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 since the Internet has a powerful impact on our
life
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.
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, the Internet has changed the way we search for information. In the past, it was hard to find the right information by using books or the newspaper.
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, nowadays, the Internet saves us time but still gives the precise information we need to find.
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, the knowledge on the Internet are diversified and up-to-date so we could call the Internet as a source of human knowledge.
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, the Internet helps us to communicate more easily.
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 of meeting face-to-face, we can interact with each other through the Internet.
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 helps us to communicate from far
distance but
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distance, but
 still send and receive almost instantly. And
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, the Internet is the foundation for future innovations. Right now the world’s trend is to build the 4.0
industry
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industries
 and the Internet
plays
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play
 an important part to create it. In conclusion, the Internet has been a great invention to
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human
 society. It’s hard to imagine how our
life
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 would change if there were no Internet since it has affected every aspect of our
life
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.

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