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There are many reasons that can motivate a person to stay working for the same company. Some believe that money is the main reason. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued that people do not want to
change
 their
job
 because of the salary they get from their current employers,
however
, there are some other advantages of doing
job
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a job
the job
jobs
 for the same company. People prefer to do
job
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jobs
 for the same organization because they are afraid of
change
 and they have medical facilities in their old
job
. The primary reason of working for the same company is that people do not want to
change
 their
lives
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life's
life
 patterns.
That is
 to say that most people become habitual of same
routine work
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routine, work
 and they are afraid of doing some other
job
. They just want to do the same work on
daily basis
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a daily basis
 and do not want any
change
 in their lives.
For example
, a recent report
of
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by
 the Jang newspaper revealed that 48% of people do not
change
 their
job
 just because they are afraid of changing their daily routine. The
second
 main reason is that they have to leave the medical benefits for some time.
In other words
, the new company does not give them that privilege from the start of their
job
 and they have to wait for the provisional time period so they can get medical and other benefits.
For instance
, there is a law in Pakistan that an employee can only eligible for medical benefit after working 3month for the same organization. In conclusion,
although
 a lot of people think that people want to do the same
job
 for their whole lives just because of money, they are afraid of
change
 and
also
 have to give up the medical benefits for
particular time period
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a particular time period
.
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