Some people think that people who live in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy. Some think that there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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people think that there are some merits to settle in high-rise apartments. In not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
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this
essay, I will discuss both sides and give my view at the end.
The luxurious apartments will broaden the gap between dwellers and their related people. The majority of high-rise apartments located in Linking Words
suburbs
or remote areas. In these areas, people will live without other friends and relatives. It means that the dwellers Suggestion
the suburbs
will
isolated with public society. Suggestion
will be
For example
, some workers have to choose these Linking Words
apartmentsapartment
because of working demand. There spend all the time in working. When they finish the daily work, they should go back home to rest rather than date with other people. By Suggestion
apartments, apartments
apartments apartments
apartments apartment
this
life pace with luxurious apartments, people will open the gaps with their friends.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, Linking Words
this
choice of lifestyle is ideal for people who wish to live Linking Words
solitarily
. characterized by or preferring solitude
solitary
these
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These
suituation
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situations
situation
station
is
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are
are being
have been
suit
for solitaries. As every known, some single works can Suggestion
suited
do the
better at quiet environment. Accept comma addition
do, the
Such
as Linking Words
programing
and painting. It need worker pay the most attention to the work. The high-rise apartments can provide setting an order and time for planned events
programming
quiet environment
to help people to keep their attention. Suggestion
a quiet environment
Linking Words
Further more
, social anxiety in addition
Furthermore
disorder
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disorder, also needs
disorder also needs
also
need a lonely circumstance to Linking Words
living
. If social anxiety disorder Suggestion
live
stay
at crowded areas or noisy areas, they will feel uncomfortable and unhappy. Not everyone will be happy at the social place. The luxurious apartments Suggestion
stays
is
the best place for their living.
In conclusion, living in luxurious apartments will bring some advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, happy or unhappy will be Suggestion
are
varies
between different people and people. No one definite answer Suggestion
variances
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to
this
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question but
I think that the people feel good about themselves is the best.Accept comma addition
question, but
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite