You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing you

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letter to complain about my room which I currently share with a new student and how his actions have made it practically impossible for me to study. Let me

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explain my situation, my roommate is a major in creative and liberal arts so he has to engage in constant rehearsals on a daily basis with some of his classmates and they frequently have their music stereo speakers on at odd times of the day rehearsing and jumping around the apartment.

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, as a medical student, I find their noise and actions quite distracting and it makes me lose concentration. I would kindly prefer to be moved to another room. It would certainly be better if I could get a roommate who is in my faculty and does not need a lot of noise to study. I look forward to your favourable action on

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matter. Thank you. Yours Faithfully, Stella Krkalio.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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8 paragraphs

162 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

accommodation officer
roommate
share a room
living arrangement
difficult to work
noise levels
study environment
privacy concerns
alternative accommodation
single room
academic performance
well-being
respectfully request

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