You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing you
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letter to complain about my room which I currently share with a new student and how his actions have made it practically impossible for me to study. Let me
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explain my situation, my roommate is a major in creative and liberal arts so he has to engage in constant rehearsals on a daily basis with some of his classmates and they frequently have their music stereo speakers on at odd times of the day rehearsing and jumping around the apartment.
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, as a medical student, I find their noise and actions quite distracting and it makes me lose concentration. I would kindly prefer to be moved to another room. It would certainly be better if I could get a roommate who is in my faculty and does not need a lot of noise to study. I look forward to your favourable action on
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matter. Thank you. Yours Faithfully, Stella Krkalio.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation officer
  • roommate
  • share a room
  • living arrangement
  • difficult to work
  • noise levels
  • study environment
  • privacy concerns
  • alternative accommodation
  • single room
  • academic performance
  • well-being
  • respectfully request
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