Writing task : Giving lectures in auditoriums to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching. With the technology available today, everything should be done online. Do you agree or disagree

Some people feel that in
this
age of online lectures and computer programs, the traditional
way
of giving lectures in large classrooms has become old-fashioned / ineffective. I do not agree with
this
view. In my opinion, online lectures can be very convenient;
however
, traditional
way
of teaching is more effective and makes learning easier. On the one hand, many people choose to take online lectures because they are very convenient. Many people study while working to upgrade their educational qualifications to get a promotion at work. These online lectures and online courses will allow working people to watch the lectures during their free time.
For instance
, these lectures can be watched during the weekend and they
also
allow people to pause in the middle of the lecture
and and
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
watch later. Because of
this
flexibility and convenience online lectures are very popular among many people.
Conversely
, many students find the traditional
way
of teaching in classrooms more effective. Traditional lectures allow students to interact with lecturers when there is clarification required. To put it in another
way
, traditional lectures establish a connection between lecturers and students.
For instance
, a lecturer can tell at any point of time whether or not his students understand the lesson by simply looking at their faces and body language. Since online lectures are pre-recorded and delivered via the computer,
this
interaction between the teacher and the student is not possible. To conclude, it is evident that online lectures give people the freedom to learn at a time convenient to
them whereas
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them, whereas
traditional lectures provide the opportunity to interact with the teacher and clear doubts. In my opinion, online lectures cannot completely replace the
class room
a room in a school where lessons take place
classroom
lectures because they fail to create an important human connection between lecturers and students.
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