Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activity that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In
this
contemporary world
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Time
plays
significant role
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a significant role
in humankind
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As we know
time
and tide won't wait for anyone
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Conservation of
time
comes into
picture especially
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picture, especially
leisure
time
.
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There are numerous ways to handle leisure
time
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Firstly
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For example
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assume it you are working in any corporate multinational company
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you
you you
will experience stressful and hectic situations through the weekend. In
this
case concerned people need some peace of mind so they need to meditate
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However
, we have various methods excluding
mediatiton
a negotiation to resolve differences that is conducted by some impartial party
mediation
like sleeping, listening to music in order to make yourself stress free.
Secondly some
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Secondly, some
people argue that how
effeciently
with efficiency; in an efficient manner
efficiently
you use your free
time
like solving puzzles like sudoku which will enhance your analytical skills and reading books novels and articles which can improve
grammatical
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grammar
and
communications
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communication
skills
.
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Reading
news papers
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspapers
make
also
improve your reading skills and vocabulary range
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However
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In my point of
view
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view, this
this
notion always stood in bias, because people spend
there
of them or themselves
their
leisure
time
according to
there
of them or themselves
their
requirements and flexibility.
However some
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However, some
people spend
there
of them or themselves
their
ideal
time
with
there
of them or themselves
their
family
.
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I firmly conclude that the above notion is always a biased and conservative statement to make
.
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