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Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activity that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #leisure #time #activity #mind #word #puzzles #rest
In
this
 contemporary world
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Time
 plays
significant role
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a significant role
 in humankind
.
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 As we know
time
 and tide won't wait for anyone
.
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 Conservation of
time
 comes into
picture especially
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picture, especially
 leisure
time
.
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 There are numerous ways to handle leisure
time
.
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Firstly
,
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For example
,
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 assume it you are working in any corporate multinational company
u
second person pronoun; the person addressed
you
you you
 will experience stressful and hectic situations through the weekend. In
this
 case concerned people need some peace of mind so they need to meditate
.
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However
, we have various methods excluding
mediatiton
a negotiation to resolve differences that is conducted by some impartial party
mediation
 like sleeping, listening to music in order to make yourself stress free.
Secondly some
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Secondly, some
 people argue that how
effeciently
with efficiency; in an efficient manner
efficiently
 you use your free
time
 like solving puzzles like sudoku which will enhance your analytical skills and reading books novels and articles which can improve
grammatical
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grammar
 and
communications
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communication
 skills
.
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 Reading
news papers
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspapers
 make
also
 improve your reading skills and vocabulary range
.
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However
,
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,
 In my point of
view
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view, this
this
 notion always stood in bias, because people spend
there
of them or themselves
their
 leisure
time
 according to
there
of them or themselves
their
 requirements and flexibility.
However some
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However, some
 people spend
there
of them or themselves
their
 ideal
time
 with
there
of them or themselves
their
 family
.
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 I firmly conclude that the above notion is always a biased and conservative statement to make
.
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