University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages.

It is obvious that more Brits enjoyed cinemas in a theatre than Australians
did
pass from physical life and lose all bodily attributes and functions necessary to sustain life
died
between 1976 and 2005. In 1975, over 100
million
British watched movies in halls while
this
was
Suggestion
has been
just around 30
million
in Australia. With some fluctuations, Australian movie-goers' number reached over 80
million
after 3 decades.
On the contrary
, British cinema attendees dropped from 1977 to 1984, but afterwards steadily went up with some minor vacillations. After 30 years, almost 160
million
British went to cinema halls- almost double than that of Australians.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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