Should young people follow older people’s advice or is it good for them to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is a debatable topic for long that whether young adults should follow
elders
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elder's
elders'
advice or challenge their view.In my opinion, youngsters should follow senior persons to gain knowledge through their experience for a situation and it is perfectly fine to challenge
elders
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the elders
on orthodox opinion and thoughts as well. I will shed light on both merits and demerits of condition. On the one hand
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young people should follow advice from seniors
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as they are
treasure
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treasures
a treasure
of knowledge and wisdom
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that has been tested and tried
since
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for
long.
For instance
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eating cumin seed help digestion
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a trick from grandmother works like wonder for
lot
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a lot
lots
of people in India.In fact
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medical Science
also
in search of these tricks that passed from generation to generation to cure few diseases.
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Thus, following
the elder worth in
few areas
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a few areas
.Another reason youngster should listen to seniors is to give respect what they have done as an individual to
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the community
.
On the other hand
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there are enough reasons to challenge to elders view.
Firstly
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today’s generation live in a high
pase
the rate of moving (especially walking or running)
pace
phase
parse
and technology driven society
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where things can possible in
blink
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a blink
of eyes.There is
vast difference
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a vast difference
in the societies where a young person and an elder raised.
For example
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In India
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elder people believe that astrology of a couple should match before marriage.
This
thought might not be accepted by a young couple who are in love and want to marry irrespective of their astrological state. In summary
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elder people should be followed based on their knowledge and situation that they had experience enough to lead the young people for betterment. But situations that affect the new thought and progress can be challenged.

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