Some people believe that schools should include competitive sports as a subject while others believe that it has negative effects on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is an argument that centres on sports competitions

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children at school by which to

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teach

as a main class or it has nothing positive affects to kids. Even though, that can show negative side to them, in my opinion, I highly believe that competitive physical activities need to young people. On the one hand, people say that let children know about competitiveness might give bad effects to them.

To begin

with, competition can be hurt to their mind of co-operation with friend, if they learn about race before

collabolation

act of working jointly

collaboration

with others, in the future kids will be trusted nobody.

In addition

, if young ones cannot be together the society will be collapsed very soon.

As a result

, children cannot have friends and be alone getting

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to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)

further

farther

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and become

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island that will be

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a very big risk

to the society in the

futher

a male parent (also used as a term of address to your father)

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further

.

For example

, in Japan, they are

strugling

engaged in a struggle to overcome especially poverty or obscurity

struggling

strangling

issue about Hkikomori, which is people who just stay

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in

the own room because they felt they are looser them self.

On the other hand

, I highly believe that competitive sports are very helpful to learn something for their future.

Firstly

, they can be learnt about teamwork with

friend

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friends

a friend

, most sports are usually teamwork, so kids will know how to team going and their

rolls

the actions and activities assigned to or required or expected of a person or group

roles

in the group.

For example

, under 20 years old football

team

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teams

in my country was very issue about their school life because they are helping friends more than others and always trying to do together with people who around them.

Secondly

, children can be more healthy,

commanly

under normal conditions

commonly

sports make them physically and mentally stronger, which is one of the most important

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things

for kids.

Lastly

, it is one

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their future or dreams, if they are trained well they could be a sports star of course not everyone but the rates gone higher. In conclusion,

although

learn competitive

excercise

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercise

from school could show negative side, in my point of view I am convinced that there is

more positive effect

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a more positive effect

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for

on

kids.