Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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It is true that and caring for a

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needs great responsibility, and raising a

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is not an easy task.

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, I disagree with the

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that we should force all mothers and fathers to attend courses related to the childcare. In my opinion, the

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that all future parents should take a parenthood preparation course is impractical. Many prospective parents have jobs and busy schedules, and they may not be willing to or able to attend regular parenting courses.

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raises the question of whether those who missed the classes, or perhaps refused to attend would be punished. It would be wrong to do

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be impossible to enforce the

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of compulsory parenting training.

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, even if people were forced to do so, I think it would be too difficult to decide the syllabus of the parenting course that fits everybody because every individual has a different mindset.

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, I would agree that training for parents are unnecessary. Mothers and fathers of older generations have been

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without any formal instruction or an official interference for thousands of years. Parenting skills have been learnt from older family members, friends, neighbours.

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, some adults have an instinct that guides them during parenting, and many parents get better at the childcare by trial and error;

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, a good

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different strategies for raising his

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her

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properly, and in time he

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she will eventually know which one fits best for him

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her and his

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her

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. Neither of them mentioned in

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for some, I believe that

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Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people believe that students should begin learning a language very early in schoop while others think these subjects should be taught later. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people prefer to travel in their own country when they have some time off. Others think that it is better to take a trip to a foreign country. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your choice.

The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuels. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?