You are currently running a course and have a part-time job. Your boss suggested that you leave your course and work full time. Write a letter to your boss. in your letter, you should: -tell him/her your decision -explain the reason of your decision.
Dear Mrs Clark,
I am writing to you to inform you of my decision about working full time.
First of all, I want to thank you for
such
an opportunity. To be honest, I have not made a choice yet, because there are a lot of cons and pros. I want to tell you and hear your opinion on that. I know that my work was perfectly done all the time and even my colleagues noticed it. I am so dedicated to the waiters that I bring with me to the restaurant love and enjoyment every day. Therefore
, I am willing to improve my skills, be the best employer ever and get a promotion.
On the other hand
, I do not have a lot of experience yet, so it can cause problems sometimes. In addition
, I have school 2 times a week from 4 to 8pm, so I will have to go home earlier. These are two main factors that make me dwell on my decision. If you are okay with it, we can discuss your proposition.
To sum up
, I am ready to level up, and if you understand my requests - just let me know.
Thank you in advance
KseniiaSubmitted by ksrnnn on
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task achievement
Consider directly stating your decision at the beginning to meet the task requirements more effectively.
coherence cohesion
Try to use varied linking words and paragraphing more effectively to improve the flow and clarity of your ideas.
task achievement
Enhance your letter by adding more detailed reasons and possibly elaborating on how the decision impacts your long-term goals.
task achievement
You maintained a polite and respectful tone throughout, which is suitable for this context.
coherence cohesion
You effectively used a greeting and closing in your letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,