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Some think spending a lot on birthday celebration and weddings is a waste of money. Others think that it is important for young people and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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People’s opinions seem to differ on whether spending cash lavishly on celebrations and special occasions is a positive trend or a mere wastage of
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. While some seem to agree with the argument that it is necessary for the society, I believe that
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 unmindful spending should rather be avoided.
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 with, there are myriad reasons to argue that spending loads of
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 on weddings and other special occasions is quite unnecessary.
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, in most of today’s celebrations there is a deliberate show of power and easy
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.
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 extensive celebrations are no better than pomp shows.
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,
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 of spending huge amounts of
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 on any celebration, it is better to save it and later invest it in better ways.
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 of spending lots of
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 on a child’s
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 birthday party in a five-star hotel, it is better to save it for his/her higher education.
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, sometimes spending on special occasions like birthdays, anniversaries and h
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 become a social obligation for many people and they give in to the societal pressure spending their hard-earned
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.
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, people who argue that it is imperative to have grand celebrations opine / insist that it is a way of enjoying life with their family and friends. They feel that
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 celebrations are part of their customs and traditions. While
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 may be true to a certain extent, in my opinion, there is no need to spend truck loads of
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 on celebrations.
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, a birthday party held at home can be as enjoyable as the one held at a five star hotel and yet it costs much less. To conclude, I feel that unmindful spending on any occasion can be avoided.
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 that
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 should be saved or used in a better way
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