# Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. they believe that this not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss the view and give your own opinion.

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In every part of the world, meat and fish are highly consumed. Many people prefer to not eat them because they believe that it is not only better for their personal health. They
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think it benefits the world in general.
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essay will discuss mainly the advantages of choosing to not eat them as a whole. There are more advantages than disadvantages for not choosing to eat them. The
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edge to a lot of people is a healthy and well shaped body.
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, more than 50 years ago when the major source of feeding was fresh, natural produce gotten from harvesting in the farm. Most of the food available
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was fresh vegetables even though there was animal meat to eat a little from time to time, but they were not the main course of the day. The
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advantage, linked to the
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, is the healthy eating lifestyle they were already used to and the addition of exercising to enhance long life and a good body shape. Personally, I think a lot of people who talk against not eating them are the people that don't have a medical condition yet that requires them to stay away from protein. Discussions and awareness campaigns need to happen to educate many young people on the advantages of rapid reduction and complete abstinence from the consumption.
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, Tv and radio stations should present troubling facts the body experiences when people sit and consume a 50kg worth of steak in one sitting.
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to warning people,
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projects could educate them better on practical balance in consumptions of the proteins. In conclusion, unless efforts are made to help the public consciously stay away, it will escalate into a problem and individuals need to take responsibility for their eating habits.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Plant-based diet
  • Chronic diseases
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Deforestation
  • Water consumption
  • Mitigate climate change
  • Natural resources
  • Animal welfare
  • Humane and ethical choice
  • Healthcare costs
  • Sustainable farming
  • Legumes
  • Fruits and vegetables
  • Vegetarian
  • Vegan
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