Some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweight the disadvantages. According to some academicians, it is better to introduce a foreign language in elementary school than in secondary school. I agree with this view.
According to
some, learning a new language
at primary school
is beneficial for children compared to learning it later in secondary school
. According to
a recent survey, student's learning capabilities are potent when they are young, and as they age
their skill reduces for multiple reasons. Hence
, I believe younger ones exposed to new languages get better advantages compared to senior ones and I have the following comparisons to substantiate my claim.
To begin
with, the major advantage of starting it soon is, that it provides more time
for kids
to practise
and learn the new language
. During primary school
, the workload for studies is minimal and hence
, kids
can spend additional time
writing & conversing with others in the new language
. On the contrary
, if they reach high school
, the majority of their time
will be spent extensively on important academic subjects like Mathematics, Science etc and as a result
, they find it difficult to practise
foreign languages. For instance
, in many school
curriculums, English as a foreign language
is introduced during kindergarten and in primary schools, which provides the kids
with up to 7 years to learn the nuances of the language
.
Moreover
, when young, most kids
are happy due to
plenty of game time
and less study pressure. Since happy kids
tend to show more eagerness towards learning new stuff, teaching and learning a new language
becomes comparatively easy. In addition
to that, children at a younger age
do not exhibit shyness
. Because of that, even if they make mistakes while
conversing they do not care. However
, for the elder children, as they mature their eagerness drops while
their shyness
creeps in and hence
, they find it extremely inconvenient to practise
it in front of others, thinking they would commit mistakes. For example
, a child exposed to a bicycle or swimming at the tender age
of 5, learns at a faster pace compared to the older ones due to
the same reason.
So to conclude
, in my opinion, teaching new languages to younger wards is advantageous because of their eagerness to learn, lack of shyness
and huge free time
for them to practise
it. However
, due to
study pressure and shyness
, senior school
folks find it hard to master it as they age
. But, if they can break that mindset, even older school
folks can learn as well.Submitted by nusramkumar on
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task achievement
Regarding Task Response, your essay addresses the prompt well by discussing whether young children should learn a foreign language at primary school and weighing the advantages against the disadvantages. However, the argument could be made stronger by acknowledging potential counterpoints more thoroughly.
coherence cohesion
For Coherence and Cohesion, consider using transitional phrases more frequently to enhance the logical flow of ideas. For example, phrases like "Additionally," "Furthermore," or "On the other hand," can help connect thoughts more fluently.
coherence cohesion
Another advice for Coherence and Cohesion would be to refine paragraph transitions. Although you have an introduction and conclusion, smoother transitions between body paragraphs would help in maintaining a logical structure throughout the essay.
task achievement
You have presented clear and comprehensive ideas throughout your essay, which is a strong point in achieving a higher score for Task Achievement.
coherence cohesion
Your introduction and conclusion are both well-presented, effectively setting up the discussion and summarizing the key points.
task achievement
The specific examples you included, such as the survey and the comparison between learning a language and learning to ride a bicycle or swim, effectively support your main points.
Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...