pollution is becoming a major environment problem what are causes and solutions to solve this
problem?

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Environment
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the environment
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the pollution gains ground
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the causes
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evil. There are manifold causes behind
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these devices
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effect on the
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and
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on
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eforestation is gaining ground day by day.
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carbon dioxide
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is spreading its roots f
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asses throw. g
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malaria and
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water
pollution
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hardness,
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, masses should grow more and more trees.
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vehicles. To add o
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asses should grow more and more trees for the good
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution
  • environmental problem
  • causes
  • solutions
  • industrial emissions
  • vehicular emissions
  • improper waste disposal
  • deforestation
  • stricter environmental regulations
  • renewable energy sources
  • waste management systems
  • planting
  • trees
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