Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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the environmental

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problem is the most

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in the world. Some people believe that the main problem

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cause

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of reducing

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species of plants and animals.

However

, some argue that there are more important environmental problems. In my view, I totally agree with the latter opinion. Since we know every kind of creatures, especially plants and animals are the most important for the ecosystem. Unfortunately, in recent times, a large amount of wildlife, including trees has been destroyed for many reasons.

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natural

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and

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human-made

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made. So, some people believe that

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is the main cause of environmental

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problems

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because

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humans

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cannot live alone without other species.

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, everyone must eat to live, if we do not have animals, crops, and fruits, we cannot survive in

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world.

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, I disagree with the idea

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above, I believe that there are many factors which cause the problems. Losing species

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just

only

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one of the problems. The key

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environmental issues is human created

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activities

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the

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impact

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global warming.

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, using energy from electricity, using petrol for a car engine and using plastic or un-recycle packaging. Another example is people always drive cars and cut down

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trees which

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carbon dioxide and directly

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the global warming situation. In conclusion, there are many causes which affect the environment, but we have only one world.

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global and concentrate on

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natural

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resources

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for the best future life.