Some people think only online reading should only be used for a child to learn to read whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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reading while others think that they should provide only hard materials. I presume that soft online materials can be more beneficial in several ways for a youngster than printed documents, though there are some problems with online resources.
On the one hand, the consequences of online reading can deleterious for the physical and mental health of a young. Accept comma addition
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, If children read any book on their smartphone or laptop for a longer period regularly, it can cause eye stain problem. Linking Words
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rays detrimental for our eye and it may result in early blindness. A recent report of the New York Times claimed that approximately more than a quarter of juveniles are suffering from eye-related diseases because of excessive use of electronic gadgets. More importantly, indulging in digital devices at the time of reading books, a youngster can be suffering from mental problems. a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
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, pornography that may impact the severe bad influence of their psychological health. Linking Words
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, I assume these drawbacks can be minimized by taking proper guidelines and giving moral lessons by parents and teachers.
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, online materials can open a door of vast resources of knowledge in front of youngsters. Linking Words
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benefit of learning reading than an old-fashioned printed copy. Juveniles could be motivated by the alternative feature of online books that pave their way of learning.
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health, they can be blessed with countless materials with lucrative features that grow their interest in reading. It is recommended that the government should take proper steps for making available online books with enough security in the primary schools.Accept comma addition
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