Many people believe that social networking sites (such as facebook)have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society?To what extent do you agree?

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Nowadays, technology becomes an important for everyone, especially, social network.
However
, many people believe that social networks have had a huge disadvantage impact on personal and social. In my point of view I strongly agree with
this
statement. The main reason that I believe social is more negative is it reduce your
time
. Actually, in a current day, a lot of people addict to Facebook and many social media platforms, they always spent their
time
on it.
However
,
instead
of using a
time
for Facebook, students should do other activities which will be more beneficial for them and society.
For example
,
besides
using Facebook, children can play football or many kinds of sports that they like which will be more beneficial for their health and get rid of sickness. Another reason is social network is reduced emotion and reaction between face-to-face communication. Recently, we always see many people use their mobile phone without any conversations with others in real situations.
This
leads to lack of interpersonal skills which is necessary for human society, particularly, in their work.
For instance
, the conference will not achieve the objective if participate do not communicate.
In addition
, even social media can contain your relationship with many friends that you did not see for a long
time
,
nevertheless
, it will distort your relationship with your active friends when they want to meet you with face-to-face. In conclusion, social media has both sides, positive and negative, but I agree that it is a huge negative impact.
Moreover
, relationship in real life is the most important.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • erosion
  • face-to-face
  • interactions
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • misinformation
  • polarize
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • procrastination
  • productivity
  • social isolation
  • dissemination
  • breeding ground
  • vast amounts
  • personal information
  • mental health
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