New stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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Media has a very strong influence in every country. It has ability to change
peoples
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people's
mindset and the way they see things.
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Firstly I
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Firstly, I
would say showing pictures on media and
then
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deliverance of
story
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the story
is a very positive thing because people believe
on
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in
what they see and news with pictures shows more authenticity. It builds a trust in people.
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Secondly when
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Secondly, when
people only listen to
news
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the news
it leaves a doubt about the media that they are exaggerating things and the news might not be true
.
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So I believe visual media
has
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have
a strong impact on society and clears the message
that is
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being delivered. It builds a trust in viewers and make
there
of them or themselves
their
understanding for surrounding better
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Visuals
  • Textual narratives
  • Comprehension
  • Retention
  • Imagery
  • Evoking emotions
  • Pictorial bias
  • Contextual information
  • Skew understanding
  • Learning styles
  • Memory recall
  • Accessibility
  • Illiteracy
  • Language proficiency
  • Sensationalism
  • Capture the essence
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