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IELTS Writing Samples Band 1

IELTS Writing Samples Band 1

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Why do many people think life gets more difficult as we age?

Many people believe that life becomes more difficult with age.
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Some people belive that space travel is a waste of government money while others believe it is important for human development. Discuss these views and give your opinion

Some people believe that space travel is a misuse of public funds while others consider it is plays an important role in human development.
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In most universities there are more male students than female students on science courses. What is the reason for this? What could be done for balance out the number?

Most males tend to choose science courses at collage more than female in a noticeable way, how we can balance this and encourages more women attend science courses?
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A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extend do you agree/ disagree with this option?

It is really sad to say, but it is true. Intentionally or not, I believe that people seem to be judged by social life styles, and it is really sad to say that the one being judged is not the one that upload good things on a social media, but it is uasually be the one that watches others' lives and judged themselves. People are always love to upload good things in their lives on social media and thinks that if their lives have nothing good they will be judged by others. In fact, they are the one who judged themselves, already. So, these are the reason why I agree with the statement.
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Some sports are extremely dangerous for those who play them. Why do people participate in such sports? What measures could they take to minimize the risk involved?

Certain sports involve a risk of high-level danger for those who participate in them. Nevertheless,many people are still attracted to these activities. This essay will discuss why people are drawn to these activities, as it create a challenge and push an adrenaline rush among players, and suggest proper measures, like proper safety methods and following the regulations, to avoid deadly injuries.
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In some countries fast food restaurants and supermarkets give money to schools to promote their product. Do you think it’s a positive or negative development of children ?

Some of the countries do promote fast food and supermarket and asking student to promote this ads for money .
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Percentage of students proficient in a foreign language. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The given graph demonstrates the quantity of pupils become experts in additional language.
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In the modern world, many employees lack soft skills such as communication and working in teams. What are the main causes of this problem? What are the effects of the lack of such skills? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In my opinion, the reason of main this problem its causes about the rarely communication face to face or discussing with work friends in their work environment, since this digital era avarage people they usually used to working alone than working that need a soft skill such as communication like a waiters, diplomats, and much more, many people prefer to working alone because they can work easily just from with device all day especially with their laptop or their phone. So this problem will effects of their soft skills communication and it effects of their work team result . This problem are actually relevant of myself, i used to work alone with long time, and when i join for the first time working on teams, it feels like nervous and not good enough to communication, so it will happen to gain their trust to people.
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High job demands, stress and sense of commitment are among the main reasons people go to work when they are ill. This way they accomplish important tasks, but may infect others or get some serious health problems themselves. In your opinion should people go to work if they are sick?

At present times, increasing inflation has put an unseen burden on peoples mind, which is forcing them to work even when they are not well. In addition to it several other commitment to work, stress, and desire to get promotion make people work during sick days. I believe it is an incorrect practice. I will discuss reasons behind my opinion in the following paragraphs.
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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. sugary product should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, many food and baverages are produced the highest levels of sugar, contributing signifcantly to various health problems. It has been suggested that increasing the cost of these sugary products could deter consumers from purchasing them, thereby encouraging healthier dietary habits. In my opinion, I completely agree with this approach and I will eloborate the reasons wh in the following essay.
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Write an email to the sports coordinator. Give your suggestions about activities, awards, and ways to make the event more exciting. Write 120–150 words.

Thank you for asking students to share their suggestions for the upcoming School Sports Day. I would like to share a few ideas that could help make the event more enjoyable and motivating for everyone.
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Average percentages of sodium saturated fats and added typical meals consumed in the USA. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts provided illustrate the average proportion of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in typical diets consumed in America
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It is not necessary for people to travel to other places and learn about their culture. We can learn as much as from books, film and television. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In my opinion it's necessary for people to travel that you will be thrilled to bits to being in the same place that the topic in. Altough it's benefit to learn from books , film , television even documantries it's effortless and saved more money. I think if you can go to places that their culture you want to know go, not just faffing surround your room and be bewildered. As I mention books, television and films it's quite benfit and you must use it constantly specially in place that you can't go in for give an idea: place that was in the past it doesn't available right now or hazard place that you can't reach easily. occasionly it's abt to person.
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In many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an approriate use of government money?

Technology is improving each year, even each month the modern cities establishing new things. Every people know that Chineese people are living 10 year after us. They are even better than all of technology asset from Europe.
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Each year, the crime rate increases.What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal

It is irrefuatble that crime is burgeoning day by day in many countries.Three are numerous of reason behind this phenomenon and several ways to prevent it. This essay will discuss both reasons and solutions in the forthcoming paragraphs.
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Some poeple think that teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

I believe that happiness is a subjective experience that can occur at any stage of life. While teenage years may offer carefree moments and emotional highs, adult life often provides deeper fulfillment through personal achievements and relationships. The key to happiness may lie in how individuals navigate the challenges and opportunities of each stage. Embracing the joys of youth while cultivating a sense of purpose and connection in adulthood can lead to a well-rounded, fulfilling life. Ultimately, creating meaningful experiences and maintaining healthy relationships are crucial components of happiness at any age.
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The co-working is planning to improve. What do you think could be improve. Write informal your friend

How are you? I hope you’re doing well. Did you get an email from the hub manager? I recently received it , and it made me very happy because they asked for my opinion.
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Science tells us that some activities are good for our health while some others are bad. Dispite knowing that millions of people all over the world continue with unhealthy activities. Why do you think this is the case and what might be done to change it

In my opinion thus problem can be result of lacking knowledge about awarehess about consequences unhealthy activities. And also we can say that lacking willpower even people can undesrtand effect this tasks. In some countries their culture might be lead to do harmful activities like special traditional foods for example in Mexico or in India people eat mostly very spicy meals and failure to observe hygienic rules.
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In many developed countries, life expectancy is rising while birthrates are falling. As a result, the elderly will make up a much larger proportion of the population in future. Is this a positive or negative development?

There is no doubt that life expectency nowadays is raising while birthrates on the other hand are falling, people could argue that the elderly will make up the major proportion of the population in the future and i firmly bellieve that could lead to a negetive impact in our development as a nation.
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Some people think that it is better to choose friends who always have some options, Other people believe it’s good to have those who disagree. discuss both views and give your options.

Some people think that it's better to hang out with friends who can offer some options, others argue that it's better to have friends who disagee, We are gonna discuss the advatages and disadvanteges of each side.
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