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IELTS Writing Samples Task 2
IELTS Writing Samples Band 1

IELTS Writing Samples Band 1

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Many people sayt that we now live in ,,consumers societiesʼʼ where money and possessions are given to much importance. To what extent do you agree or diagree

In the recent years,cost expensis is rapidly increasing in a lot of countries over world which is more likely lead to be consumer societies while this may seem like a controversial move to some. I firmaly believe the world has changed and we have to accommodite the fact that we are living in consumers societies.
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The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. Schools should cut subjects such as arts and music out of the curriculum so that children can focus on subject such as information technology. To what extent do you agree?

Knowing that the role of education is to prepare children for the mordern world doesn't mean they should change the way it's.
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It is a positive thing for people who are in senior management positions in companies to have much higher salaries than other employees in the same company or organzation. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

A school of thought holds that higher salaries given to senior managers, compared to other employees would be advantageous. From my perspective, I partially agree with this perception due to the following reasons.
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1.1.part Zulayho You wont beleive what happened .I recently ordred new Laptop which is iconic around the world especialy my country but the courier delevred it to a neighbor who went to on a holiday .Finally I got this Laptop 2 week later .This Laptop condition very owfull and stop working .I beleive the campany must take full responsibilty and offer my funding .cheers .Dilnoza

I am writing to inform you about issue with watch.When I firstly buy this watch condition is better than ather itms but may be 2 week later the watch compeletely stopped working and the watch screen frozen .I am tried changing the watch battery but it did not help to .l do not know why this watch compeletely stopped working.At first when I ordred this watch I wait a lot of day because the courier delevred it to a neighbor which is went to Istanbul where loceted in a Turkey as the result this watch demeged l beleive your company which is opened newly and your service should take full responsibilty and use ather usefull method if you use better way and replace your service you will be achive great goal .Thank you your attention.your soncerely
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You recently received a message from youth center. The manager asked students what equipment should we use? What space should be created? Should we create areas for gaming and relaxing? How can we make it more welcoming? Write a short note to your friend, who is also a member of the youth center. Tell them how you feel about the center and what improvements you think the youth center needs Write about 50 words.

Did you hear what’s going on? It made me feel quite disappointed. I think they should take action because students don’t enjoy spending time there. Also, it would be nicer if they could deal with it properly, since adding game consoler, a quiet relaxing area, comfortable seating and more sports equipment would make it more welcoming.
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Some people think that liking your job is more important than how much money you earn while others think that your salary is more important than how much you like your job. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

I believe that liking your job is the first step towards getting to know yourself better. We represent ourself with how we interact with other people, act towards them, and make use of our daily life. The main thing to know is how to enjoy liking those challenging jobs that provides more money. It is certainly better to do a much easier job with a high salary, but life making decisions comes with a higher price. That is why higher salary job comes with a much higher risks. Albeit getting a job that you dislike meaning those jobs will get repeatingly repetitive.
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In many countries, many people do not do exercise or play any sport. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society?

In many countries many people do not do exercise or play any sport this is caused by a social environment and various social factors also have life busy with work or study and also family .
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IN SOME COUNTRIES OWING THE HOME RATHER THEN RENTING ONE IS IMPORTANT ? WHYS MIGHT BE THE CASE DO YOU THINK IT IS A POSITIVE SIDE OR NEGATIVE.

In many countries, an increasing number of people choose to rent a home rather than own one. I strongly believe that it is a negative development because it lead to finiancial insecurity and lack of long-term stability.
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Increasing car uses in many global cities has caused a number of problems. Some cities have proposed banning private vehicles from the city centre. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

A and B give the same current on the I-V plot, with voltage at two different values. Current depends on driving force (ΔV) and the conductance (G) (I = ΔV×G). The same current can still show up with a trade-off between ΔV and G. A current (I) can have larger driving force with less conductance could be the same current that have smaller driving force with a larger conductance. The number of channels, and the probability of being open (Po), don’t directly depend on current itself. That part comes from conductance, (G= NPoγ). Two currents with the same value don’t mean they have same channels availability.
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The world production output from Asia, Europe, and the rest of the world in different years.

The given bar graph illustrates the manufacture of the world from Asia, Europe and other countries of the worldwide between 1840-2000.
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Learning abaut the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that people who live in the present do not need to learn about the past and it has no value in the modren world. from my perspective, I strongly agree that shearching about the past is useless.
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This is a diagram on the topic of how to pu’erh tea is made.

The given flowchart diagram illustrates the steps of making puerh raw and ripe tea. The main component of the tea, which is the tea leaf, is pan fried for enzymes deactivation, before being rolled and left dried under direct sunlight. After that, the dried tea is called loose raw tea, which can be compressed to get raw tea or underwent mold fermentation to achieve loose ripe tea.
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Fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world. However, people are encouraged to use alternative energy sources such as wind energy, solar energy and so on. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Most of the industries rely on fossil fuels as the essential part of the power around the globe. Despite,  this type of consumption could already be replaced by the mean of the power plants which produce drastically low green gas emissions. This type of energies comes from natural force such as: wind energy, solar energy and etc.
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Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do different kinds of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is a common belief that the change career at least once in their life and doing different kinds of jobs can make positive effect in mind. However, Some people argue that the change their career at least once is too dangerous. They have two significant reasons: 'different' kinds of jobs already have a lot of risks, too much new challenge bring crucial stress in mind. Therefore, I fully disagree this common belief
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The bar tart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The graph illustrates the proportion of the constant body activity for the Australian population, based on different age category in 2010.
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Today, many people getting married at the age of thirties and having children rather than marry at teen age. Is this a positive or negative development?

2.The authors test this idea in a few linked ways. They use IL-17RAfl/fl mice crossed with different Cre lines to switch off IL-17RA in T cells, myeloid cells, keratinocytes or in all tissues. Psoriasis- like skin changes are brought on daily 5% imiquimod cream on the back and ears for 5 – 6 days, with scores each day for redness, scaling and skin thickness. To see how inflamed the skin is, ear samples go through flow cytometry for myeloid cells, H & E and MPO/F4/80 stains on sections, and qPCR on ear RNA.
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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learninh and taking responsibilities. What are your opinions on this?

In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work and they are some people regard this as completely wrong.
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Your city library is closing for renorvation for three months Write a short message to your classmete about how you feel and what you will do instead

Did you hear that our library was closed for three months? I am really upset about this situation because it was the best place for me. I used to go to the library to read books when I was bored, and the library helped me to relax. I think we may be bored until the library is fixed again.
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Students in university should be specialized in one subject rather than to develop a wider range of knowledge in many different subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The data given shows export earnings of 5 different products between 2015 and 2016. Information about percentile changes in value in the given years are shown in the table. Overall, exports increased except for gems and jewellery.
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Nowadays governments are investing more in public transport such as buses and trains rather than in building new roads. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, governments have invested a lot in public transit systems, like buses and trains. This approach has made postive influence in human society. I think its benefits are more substantial.
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