Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it could cause problems. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that by getting older people at the
age
of 60 and more are not able to work even can cause some problems.
This
essay will partly show an argument as the
age
is not obstacle as well as can make some social problems. In today's job market, many older people desire to stay and carry on doing their job even if they are retired. It is a wrong opinion that individuals after pension can not bring benefits to employers because their experience and knowledge can be valuable and significantly important for companies.
For example
, in Kazakhstan many teachers continue teaching after retirement because there is a permanent dismissal among young tutors and mostly only old teachers stay for a long time in one place and bring their benefits in the educational sphere.
Thus
, it makes us clear why outdated employees are beneficial.
However
, the people of the respectable
age
can hinder young generation because many organisations would like to have experienced, qualified workers and do not want to hire not experienced employees
as a result
many graduates after institutions suffer from unemployment.
Moreover
, young individuals can be more active, full of energy flexible and easy to learn.
For instance
, now it is the century where almost all working places are computerised and the young are better at it rather than the adults.
Therefore
, old workers can cause some issues. In conclusion, the opinion that the older generation are not able to employ and can bring some drawbacks is wrong thoughts. There are no obstacles for human beings in spite of the old
age
.
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