You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. You should write at least 250 words.

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It is often believed that participating in sports playing in teams is better than individual sports. Others think that individual sports are more valuable than

team

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sports. In

this

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essay both statements will be considered,

however

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, in my opinion, individual sports like

box

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boxing

and karate outweigh, because people, who do

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sport

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may control their result and everything depends on their efforts. Playing in

teams develop

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teams, develops

teams develops

cooperation, respect and strong friendship.

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, the

team

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sports promote teamwork. Football,

for instance

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, is a strategic

sport

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game, which makes the

team

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members act as one organism. The

team

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members are like family, because they communicate with each other very tightly and care about their teammates.

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, each mistake of the

team

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member reflects to the common score, and

possibility

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the possibility

of losing

game

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the game

is higher. Individual sports are beneficial, in my opinion, because sportsman rely on themselves.

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, they might train more whenever they want and get their championship.

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, Gena Golovkin is one of the best boxers in the world according to the American National

Sport

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Association, who win all championships.

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, they do not depend on other people.

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, they are absolutely independent in their scores. Eventually, all

individuals’

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individual

efforts will pay off, if they do their best. To conclude, taking part in

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team

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a team sport

sport

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is much

better according

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better, according

to the opinion of some people, because their result is common. Others believe that individuals have more benefits, because they act independently. I think that participating in individual

sport

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is more advantageous.

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