Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion.
While certain individuals perceive that sporting is vital for young people at school, others believe that
this
should be completely voluntary. In Linking Words
this
essay I will discuss both views before coming down to a conclusion.
On the one hand, sporting promotes a healthy life as well as refreshing a student's mind from educational stresses. To elaborate, being involved in physical activities allows the body to shed off some calories Linking Words
hence
combating obesity. Linking Words
For example
, research has shown that overweight Linking Words
tend
to Suggestion
tends
loose
some weight when they immerse themselves in activities fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
such
as jogging, basketball. Linking Words
Additionally
, sports act as a form of diversional therapy Linking Words
thus
it refreshes the mind from Linking Words
book
and assignment stresses Suggestion
the book
a book
books
hence
vital to children. If schools Linking Words
where
to ignore sporting, have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
then
health problems like depression and obesity would prevail.
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On the other hand
, as much as physical activity is important, it should be completely voluntary. Linking Words
This
is because some students suffer from certain health conditions which do not allow them to exercise. Linking Words
For instance
, Linking Words
asthma which
is exacerbated by dust and heart problems. Accept comma addition
asthma, which
Moreover
, some might start to have poor grades due to sporting since they will be devoting more time than to education itself. Linking Words
For example
, a learner might uses their study time to do athletics Linking Words
hence
their grades will reduce considerably.
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conclusion
, sporting is extremely important in improving the health systems by Suggestion
concluding
prevent
conditions Suggestion
preventing
such
as obesity as well as refreshing the mind. Linking Words
However
, caution Linking Words
need
to be exercised to allow a balance Suggestion
needs
in
education and sporting and Suggestion
between
also
history for students should be collected to rule out any diseases.Linking Words
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