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Many working people get little or no excercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

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Work is very important in our lives.
having
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Having
 healthy lifestyle and having
fit body
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a fit body
 is
also
 important.
some
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Some
 of the company today they give 8hrs per day not included the overtime and one day rest per week.
most
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Most
 of the people today they don't have time to do
exercise
 which is important to our lives.
On the other hand
 people
now a days
in these times
nowadays
 experienced having health problems because of some reason's
first
 some working people they
gonto
to on
onto
joint
 work early in the morning and going home late at night so they
don't have
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don't have to exercise
exercise
.
second some
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Second, some
Second some
 that taking one day rest they focusing on household chores or they
going
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are going
go
 out with
there
of them or themselves
their
 family.
and
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And
last
 working in malls or other retail store during your
breaktime
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break time
 you can't do
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
exercise
 because they give only one hour break they choose to set or eat snacks. Most of the people nowadays they ignore the benefits or
important
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the importance
importance
 of having little
exercise
 that's why the result was they having health problem.
the
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The
 very best thing to do is to manage our time or do some
exercise
 like walking if your work is not so far from your house you can do walking.
but
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But
, some people really hate doing
exercise
 so you can help yourself being fit by taking healthy food.
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