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The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel force in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel force in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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There
are
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two year
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two-year
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comparison
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comparisons
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 with
units
 of electricity by fuel source in Australia. In 1980 production with
the
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a
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 total of 100
units
, coal
manufacture
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manufacturing
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 has 50
units
, natural
gas
 and
hydro power
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hydropower
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 productions have 20
units
, and oil
manufacture
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manufacturing
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have
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has
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 10
units
. In 2000 production with
the
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a
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 total of 170
units
, coal
manufacture
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manufacturing
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 that takes almost half of it with 130
units
,
hydro power
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hydropower
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 construction has 36
units
, and oil and natural
gas
 construction
have
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has
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 2
units
.
On the other hand
, there ate
two year
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two-year
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 comparison as well with
units
 of electricity by fuel force in France. In 1980 production with
the
Correct article usage
a
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 total of 90
units
,
coal
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and coal
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 and natural
gas
 construction have 25
units
. Oil manufacturing
have
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has
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 20
units
,
while
 nuclear power manufacturing
have
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has
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 5
units
. In 2000 management with
the
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a
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 total of 180
units
,
the
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and the
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 largest protraction is
a
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apply
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nuclear energy with 126
units
. Coal and grease manufacturing
have
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has
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 25
units
, and natural
gas
 and hydro force creation have 2
units
. In conclusion, electricity from the fuel source in Australia doesn't have nuclear energy so that
produce
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produces
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 more coal
while
 in France, they focus more on
nuclear
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the nuclear
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 energy formulation of 2000
compare
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compared
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in
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to
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1980's
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the 1980's
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 management
that
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which
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 focuses more on coal and grease.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words units, gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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