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The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#spread #english #language
It is often suggested that
English
 is one of the most important
language
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 in the world. I believe we cannot refute that speaking in
English
 nowadays is mandatory whenever communicating in another
language
 rather than your native one. In
this
 essay, we will discuss if speaking in
English
 will continue to be seen as a benefit or not in the future. The first consideration is convenience.
English
 is the second
language
 in most bilingual
countries
, where people tend to speak two tounges because
this
 benefits them. The reasons for
this
 are
most
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 economical.
For example
, because it is a country that receives a lot of tourism or exports its manufactures to another country that do not speak their native
language
. It is usually believed that there are more
English
-speaking
countries
 that are more important than non-speaking ones. The second consideration would be
that is
 compulsory nowadays to know the
English
language
 in order to communicate.
English
 country citizens are used to assuming that people from non-speaking
countries
 manage
English
 because in most bilingual schools the second
language
 children learn apart from their birth
language
 is
English
.
On the other hand
,
English
 as a global
language
 may have its drawbacks. It does not encourage to respect
culture
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 and customs of non-speaking
countries
. Non-
English
 speakers generally feel that their
countries
 are not important enough because their mother tongue is not mostly understood by other people. Ultimately, it cannot be argued that
English
 is and will continue to be considered globally the most important
language
.
However
, we must encourage the importance of the diversity of knowing different idioms, and not discriminate against those who do not speak the
language
.
This
 is something governments should be aware of in their international policies.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global language
  • lingua franca
  • communication
  • employment opportunities
  • economic growth
  • cultural exchange
  • knowledge sharing
  • education
  • travel
  • linguistic diversity
  • cultural imperialism
  • linguistic imperialism
  • colonization
  • identity
  • language preservation
  • cultural heritage
  • mutual understanding
  • intercultural relationships
  • linguistic barriers
  • disadvantaged communities
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