In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyles of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Time flies, living standards have been improved day by day, with the globalization, the generation gap
also
seems to change the living environment as well as eating
habit
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habits
and aspects of lifestyle among teenagers and their forebears. Many claim that
this
problem will bring bad results, in my opinion, I see eye to eye with
this
statement
Firstly
, eating
habit
has great effect on
people
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peoples'
peoples
health, which is not an exception for children. It is obvious that children these days commonly consider fast
food
as the easiest and the fastest thing to fill their empty stomach, which is provided in every corner of a
neighborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
such
as hamburger, pizza, etc. Fast
food
did not exist in previous generation society. It is important to become aware of that
this
kind of
food
is not
containing
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contained
or containing very little nutrition. Meanwhile, in
the young
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the younger
younger
ages are better to consume
nutrition
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nutrition, food
food
which useful for their brain as well as their physical conditions.
Moreover
, children do not eat fruits and vegetables as much as
previous generation
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previous generations
the previous generation
. The drawback of eating fast
food
is getting obesity, which is becoming common issues of young people nowadays.
Secondly
, in
term
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terms
of lifestyle, children in the past used to play with their peers most of the time, whereas nowadays children are occupied
with
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by
modern and private gadgets.
For example
, students go to school by their
parent’s
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parents’
private cars
instead
of walking with their classmates as their grandparents did before.
This
caused
from
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by
factors
such
as too much rely on technological devices or stressful from academic. Many gadgets
such
as computers or video games deprive time for physical activities in children.
This
habit
may have many disadvantages,
for example
, becoming addicted which lead to the lack of contact with their friends and
also
get sick because they never do exercises.
Last
but not least, ways of communication among children and previous generations
also
change. Old people like
enjoy
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to enjoy
enjoying
talking in person
in coherent
without logical or meaningful connection
incoherent
style whereas
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style, whereas
young people prefer chatting by phones and using teen codes.
This
problem causes misunderstanding among them. In conclusion, the differences in aspects of eating
habit
and lifestyle in children
is somewhat having
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are somewhat having
more negative impacts on their life compared with their forebears.
However
, we all can solve these problems by mixing and balancing the old and the new mode of eating and living in an acceptable way.
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