In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
The phenomenon seen in modern
society
is the families's size change. The changes of family structure cause the roles of them as well. The small size of the family would bring the positive effects which the family relationships can be close. Use synonyms
However
, I strongly believe that the forms of family which have been changed by modernize would cause the negative effects in Linking Words
society
.
Use synonyms
First
of all, in modern Linking Words
society
, the extended families are rare and the small size families, Use synonyms
such
as the nuclear family, one-parent family, and one-person household, have increased significantly. Linking Words
This
phenomenon would cause the problems on people’s mental health. People need interaction in the relationship. The person who live their own cannot share the high or low of their daily life, it may bring mental problem Linking Words
such
as the boredom or loneliness problem.
When it comes to children, in the past the extended family members, Linking Words
such
as grandparents, uncle, and aunty, functioned as the Linking Words
influencer
to children. a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influence
However
, in these days, busy parents have to rely on the nannies, after-school class or private education institute for their children. It means that the Linking Words
influencer
is changed from relatives to other things, a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influence
such
as television, the internet and other people which is not family. Linking Words
This
phenomenon would cause negative effects to children’s development, Linking Words
such
as behavioural and psychological problem.
In conclusion, the family’s changes of structure and roles have caused severe social problems in contemporary Linking Words
society
. I believe people can be happy in extended family because people need interaction with others.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite