Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. In your letter include: what you bought what the problem is why you want a refund
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing
this
to you to refund a recent online purchase that I have made from your company. Allow me to elaborate on exactly why I would like this
course of action to be realized.
I purchased a tablet computer from your website last
month to give to a friend of mine for his birthday. Unfortunately, it appears that he already has the same tablet computer in his office and thus
has no need for the one I bought for him. I hope you can empathize with my situation. Having a tablet of my own, I really do not need for
the item I purchased from you.
Change preposition
apply
Thus
, I would like to return this
item to you for a refund. From your website, I understand that if I send the item by mail to you within 60 days of the purchase date, I can expect to have my account credited for the full purchase price.
Yours faithfully,
Shiwam
Correct your spelling
Shivam
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task achievement
Consider including more specific information about the tablet, such as the model or order number, to strengthen your request.
coherence cohesion
Including brief, separate paragraphs for each main point can enhance clarity and readability.
suitable writing tone
The letter maintains a polite and formal tone throughout, which is appropriate for a request to a company.
complete response
The letter clearly addresses the main points required by the prompt: what was bought, what the problem is, and why a refund is requested.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are correctly used and provide a professional touch to the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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